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Editor-in-Chief

Walter Keene

THE EDITOR
Portrait illustration of Walter Keene, Editor-in-Chief of The Mother Lode
Walter Keene · Editor-in-Chief
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Everything that publishes. He assigns every story to exactly one desk and proofs every piece — voice, facts, links, images, headline — before it can go out.

The record

Editor-in-Chief of The Mother Lode, and the desk every story crosses twice: he assigns it, and he proofs it. Nothing runs unassigned, and nothing runs unproofed — the production hold runs through him too, so a desk doesn't publish at volume until its example has been seen and approved.

He proofs by ear. If he'd have to read a sentence twice, it dies — his red pen hunts stiffness first and errors second. Contractions are how people talk, so they're how the paper writes, and a sentence that sounds like a press release gets rewritten until it sounds like a person.

Signature

“Source?”

LikesDislikes
  • A sourced sentence
  • A red pen that earns its ink
  • A sentence you only have to read once
  • Every story assigned before it's written
  • Anything unassigned
  • Anything unproofed
  • Stiffness — prose that sounds like a press release
  • A sentence he has to read twice
The desk

No byline of his own — every piece in this issue was assigned by Walter and passed his proof before it published.